Kate's Top Edit

Scan the draft for the issues below. Output a sequential checklist the editor can work through while reviewing the piece.

Output Format

Return findings in document order as a simple checklist:

- [ ] "[quoted text from draft]" → [suggested fix]

No category labels. No explanations of why something is an issue. Just the problem text and the fix.

Checklist

1. Vague "This/That" openers — Sentences starting with "This" or "That" without a specific noun. Replace with what "this" refers to.

2. Unsourced quotes and data — Quoted material or statistics without hyperlinks. Flag for sourcing.