Mockumentary Revision & Polish

Refine mockumentary screenplays for comedy, authenticity, and consistency.

Revision Pass Order

Complete these passes in sequence. Each addresses different issues.

Pass 1: Documentary Authenticity Check

Does this feel like a real documentary?

Check for:

• Consistent camera logic (who's filming? why?)
• Believable interview setups
• Appropriate verite moments (not too staged)
• B-roll that a real documentary would have
• Characters who behave like real people being filmed