writing-revision
Writing Revision (Three-Pass System)
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Related skills: Use writing-structure-planner for planning structure, writing-stickiness for memorable messaging, writing-pre-publish-checklist for final publishing checks.
Core Principles
- One focus per pass: Each pass targets one dimension rather than fixing everything at once
- Cut 10-25%: King's formula - second draft equals first draft minus 10-25%
- Every word earns its place: If a word doesn't contribute, remove it
- First reading is correct reading: Readers shouldn't need to re-read sentences (Pinker)
- Rhythm creates engagement: Varied sentence lengths and strong endings keep readers moving
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