tighten-instruction
Tighten Instruction
Two passes in order: clarify the text into plain words, then tighten each distinct instruction or fact to one line — clarity first, so tightening never compresses back into jargon.
Steps
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State the goal in one sentence: what should the reader do or know after reading it?
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Clarify — make every phrase read cold (clear on its own). Decompose the line into phrases; name each phrase's intended meaning and fix any that won't land:
- Jargon → plain word ("down-weight" → "rank lower").
- Abstraction → concrete verb/noun ("optimize for" → "rank by").
- Ambiguous referent → name it ("them" / "the better one" → the actual subject).
- Mismatched verb → the true actor ("pick" when you only recommend → "favor").
- Cryptic compression → unpack it ("not least effort" → "not the easiest option").
Spend length here when it buys comprehension; preserve the meaning exactly.
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Tighten — cut what the clear line doesn't need. Drop any line whose only purpose is "restate the goal," "hedge," or "explain why"; keep a non-derivable rationale as a fact in Step 4. Collapse clauses the positive form already implies, and rename a heading that misnames its content. Never trade a plain word back for jargon to save space.